Flowers are not blossoming
Leaves are
not green now a days
Season is so much foggy, I see..
And sky is covered with
Undesired clouds
But,
I will still keep the “hope”;
What I want to say
You never hear
What I want to listen
You never say
Time is taking too much time
And it may be too long
But,
I will stay forever for "you";
Moments are flying, I feel
But my days are
much hard to pass
Why?
what I don’t
want to remember
Became the
slideshow ongoing forever
May be its too much
for pain too
But,
I will still tolerate whatever it;
I will have much better lives
Or I am going to die in better way
I don’t know
What my destiny keep for me..
But
I know, what I have in my hands
and how it will take the best shape,
that's why
I will ever ready to move on..
nice thoughts but one critical review, it like paragraph the words are not synch to make it poem.......
प्रत्युत्तर देंहटाएंI wrote whatever I just feel... I feel a flow in words ...You can say it poem or smthng else wat u want...m not defining this.
प्रत्युत्तर देंहटाएंthoughts are really nice. good one.
प्रत्युत्तर देंहटाएंWaw!!!! Great!!!
प्रत्युत्तर देंहटाएंI know, what I have in my hands
प्रत्युत्तर देंहटाएंand how it will take the best shape,
That's the spirit .. I like it.
gudiya "hope wins"
प्रत्युत्तर देंहटाएं