रविवार, 9 जनवरी 2011

Still don't know....

Still don't know....
why does my empty cup 
fulfill again & again ...
if you are not here 
yup, not near;
Oh! its my tear ...
I'm drowning ...
I'm drowning....

Why am I doing foolish things 
time & again ...
again & again...
though you are not listening,
perhaps not understanding..
Oh! its my hope ...
I'm wandering...
I'm wandering....

Why am I searching for festoons
ever , everywhere 
to furnish your ways
as my heart says
"rest assured",, but
Oh! why I know -
you will never come to me
I'm losing.......
I'm losing.......

my heart is not thoroughfare
its only for you dear!
I have locked it now 
and key is upto you
but why I'm doing so
Oh! love is boomerang...
I'm wavering....
I'm wavering....

now, a rainbow is merely 
a bough in autumn
but
with the onset of spring
will it flourish again 
I'm questioning..
I'm questioning...
but,
still don't know....

20 टिप्‍पणियां:

पी.सी.गोदियाल "परचेत" ने कहा…

Beautiful !

भारतीय नागरिक - Indian Citizen ने कहा…

मैं सामान्यत: अंग्रेजी कवितायें नहीं पढ़ता... लेकिन आप की कविता पढ़ी और अच्छी लगी..

बेनामी ने कहा…

It seems a madcap quest of yours for love,..... was it not understood by you. Its more like a fantastic whim, a poetical wild-goose chase, conceived entirely as you are really at a crossroad? I am not sure what it is about the feelings you protrayed in this poem , but the thoughts i have while i'm reading it epiphanal.

Dr.Ajeet ने कहा…

सम्वेदना भी खुब और शिल्प भी दमदार...! माफी चाहूंगा मेरी अंग्रेजी थोडी कमजोर है लेकिन आपकी कविता पंसद भी आयी और समझने की भी कोशिस की है...

शेष फिर पर आपका स्वागत है।

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'साहिल' ने कहा…

Nice poem!

I'm loving
I'm loving

मोहिन्दर कुमार ने कहा…

Nice thoughts wooven ... perhaps drowning makes us use our limbs to save us from downing and questioning shows that we are still alive and able to see and judge whats happening around us.

Keep writing.

संजय भास्कर ने कहा…

Nice poem

संजय भास्कर ने कहा…

आपको और आपके परिवार को मकर संक्रांति के पर्व की ढेरों शुभकामनाएँ !"

संजय भास्कर ने कहा…

Rashmi ji..
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Avinash Chandra ने कहा…

nicely knitted words.
Keep it up.

Kunwar Kusumesh ने कहा…

I read u 1st time. U hv written wonderfully. Thanx 4 visiting my blog. Hope we will be reading each other now onwards.

daanish ने कहा…

Oh! love is boomerang...

new ,,
very new version of love
wish to appreciate it !

nice write !!

IMTIYAZ KHAN ने कहा…

such nice lines as if coming from da deepest part of da heart...
i was dazzled ...
keep it up ...i strongly bolster that up.

ज़ाकिर अली ‘रजनीश’ ने कहा…

नाइस पोयम। कांग्रैट्स।


और हां, क्‍या आपको मालूम है कि हिन्‍दी के सर्वाधिक चर्चित ब्‍लॉग कौन से हैं?

Patali-The-Village ने कहा…

Beautiful & Nice poem.

यशवन्त माथुर ने कहा…

Fantastic!!!

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दीपक 'मशाल' ने कहा…

hmmm.. need to bring more depth in the feelings dear. Although I'm not a good poet but can feel that this poem demands a little hard-work to do with it.
Can say a good attempt.
My best wishes for the next one.

Rashmi savita @ IITR ने कहा…

thanx deepak ji....for advising 7 for visiting my Blog.

amit-nivedita ने कहा…

excellent...

jyoti kaur ने कहा…

nice poem mam.....u r extremely awesome...!!